You'll need to formally accept your offer. Job Offer Acceptance Email Example.Dear Jacklyn Smith, Thank you for formally offering me the Editor position at Bookster. Subject: Job offer Body: Dear Sir or Madam, I am delighted to accept the job offer you recently made to me. I look forward to starting work. We recommend mentioning the position and the company's name in the same sentence. If there are cc's, be sure to hit reply all to include those parties. Here is what I have done: "Yes, thank you I would be very interested and thrilled to work for your company. If you're on board, I'll send you more details about getting started. The subject line of your job acceptance email shouldn't be playful or vague.