Focus on three things: State your intentions, show that you have the financial means to make the purchase and make a personal appeal to the seller. In this guide, we will walk you through the process of making an offer on a commercial property.We'll discuss how to buy commercial property effectively. An Offer to Purchase Real Estate sets out the terms of a proposed real estate deal. Create yours now with our free form. OFFER: A. THIS IS AN OFFER FROM________________________________________________________________________("Buyer"). I'd like to hear comments on how to make my offer more attractive. A friend of mine did this and it is what got her the house. And I hope that adventure will start with this property. Thank you so much for considering my offer.