Connecticut Sample Letter for Letter from Department Chair Disapproving Senior Graduate Thesis

• Category: Letters - Nonlegal - Education
• State: Multi-State
• Control #: US-0593LR
• Format: Word; Rich Text

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This form is a sample letter in Word format covering the subject matter of the title of the form. [Your Name] [Your Address] [City, State, Zip Code] [Email Address] [Phone Number] [Date] [Recipient's Name] [Recipient's Position] [Department Name] [University Name] [University Address] [City, State, Zip Code] Subject: Disapproval of Senior Graduate Thesis — [Student's Name] Dear [Recipient's Name], I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you as the Department Chair of [Department Name] at [University Name] to express my concerns and disapproval regarding the senior graduate thesis submitted by [Student's Name]. After careful evaluation and thorough examination, it is with regret that I must inform you about our decision to disapprove of [Student's Name]'s thesis. As you are aware, the senior graduate thesis serves as a culmination of a student's academic journey, showcasing their mastery of subject, research skills, critical analysis, and the ability to contribute novel ideas to their field of study. Unfortunately, in the case of [Student's Name], their thesis did not meet the expected standards and requirements set forth by our department and the university. In reviewing the thesis, our department's faculty members and I found numerous issues that rendered it problematic and insufficient for approval. Firstly, the overall organization and structure were lacking, making it difficult to discern the logical progression of ideas and arguments. The thesis also lacked coherence and failed to provide a comprehensive analysis of the topic at hand. Additionally, the research methodology employed by [Student's Name] was flawed, leading to inconclusive results, unreliable data, and insufficient evidence to substantiate their claims. Furthermore, the literature review section of the thesis was inadequate. It failed to critically analyze existing scholarship, address relevant theories and frameworks, and incorporate a substantial number of academic sources. This lack of scholarly engagement and reliance on outdated information undermined the credibility and academic rigor of [Student's Name]'s work. Moreover, the conclusion drawn by [Student's Name] was premature, speculative, and did not stem from a thorough analysis of the research findings. It did not address the limitations of the study or propose areas for further research, which are crucial components of a robust and comprehensive thesis. After careful consideration of these shortcomings, it is our firm belief that approving [Student's Name]'s thesis would compromise the reputation of our department and the quality of education we strive to provide to our students. Therefore, I regret to inform you that we cannot support the thesis in its present form. However, we firmly believe in the potential of [Student's Name] to produce high-quality academic work given the necessary revisions and enhancements. We strongly encourage [Student's Name] to seek our department's guidance and address the outlined issues. By engaging in constructive feedback and making substantial revisions, we are hopeful that [Student's Name] will be able to resubmit an improved thesis that meets the required academic standards. Please convey our feedback and suggestions to [Student's Name] and encourage them to schedule a meeting with me or another faculty member designated by the department to discuss the necessary steps to rectify the deficiencies in their thesis. Together, we can foster a culture of academic excellence while supporting our students' growth and development. If you require any further clarification or additional information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I would be more than willing to provide any assistance or guidance required to ensure the successful progress of [Student's Name] towards graduation. Thank you for your attention and cooperation in this matter. Sincerely, [Your Name] [Your Position] [Department Name] [University Name]

[Your Name] [Your Address] [City, State, Zip Code] [Email Address] [Phone Number] [Date] [Recipient's Name] [Recipient's Position] [Department Name] [University Name] [University Address] [City, State, Zip Code] Subject: Disapproval of Senior Graduate Thesis — [Student's Name] Dear [Recipient's Name], I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you as the Department Chair of [Department Name] at [University Name] to express my concerns and disapproval regarding the senior graduate thesis submitted by [Student's Name]. After careful evaluation and thorough examination, it is with regret that I must inform you about our decision to disapprove of [Student's Name]'s thesis. As you are aware, the senior graduate thesis serves as a culmination of a student's academic journey, showcasing their mastery of subject, research skills, critical analysis, and the ability to contribute novel ideas to their field of study. Unfortunately, in the case of [Student's Name], their thesis did not meet the expected standards and requirements set forth by our department and the university. In reviewing the thesis, our department's faculty members and I found numerous issues that rendered it problematic and insufficient for approval. Firstly, the overall organization and structure were lacking, making it difficult to discern the logical progression of ideas and arguments. The thesis also lacked coherence and failed to provide a comprehensive analysis of the topic at hand. Additionally, the research methodology employed by [Student's Name] was flawed, leading to inconclusive results, unreliable data, and insufficient evidence to substantiate their claims. Furthermore, the literature review section of the thesis was inadequate. It failed to critically analyze existing scholarship, address relevant theories and frameworks, and incorporate a substantial number of academic sources. This lack of scholarly engagement and reliance on outdated information undermined the credibility and academic rigor of [Student's Name]'s work. Moreover, the conclusion drawn by [Student's Name] was premature, speculative, and did not stem from a thorough analysis of the research findings. It did not address the limitations of the study or propose areas for further research, which are crucial components of a robust and comprehensive thesis. After careful consideration of these shortcomings, it is our firm belief that approving [Student's Name]'s thesis would compromise the reputation of our department and the quality of education we strive to provide to our students. Therefore, I regret to inform you that we cannot support the thesis in its present form. However, we firmly believe in the potential of [Student's Name] to produce high-quality academic work given the necessary revisions and enhancements. We strongly encourage [Student's Name] to seek our department's guidance and address the outlined issues. By engaging in constructive feedback and making substantial revisions, we are hopeful that [Student's Name] will be able to resubmit an improved thesis that meets the required academic standards. Please convey our feedback and suggestions to [Student's Name] and encourage them to schedule a meeting with me or another faculty member designated by the department to discuss the necessary steps to rectify the deficiencies in their thesis. Together, we can foster a culture of academic excellence while supporting our students' growth and development. If you require any further clarification or additional information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I would be more than willing to provide any assistance or guidance required to ensure the successful progress of [Student's Name] towards graduation. Thank you for your attention and cooperation in this matter. Sincerely, [Your Name] [Your Position] [Department Name] [University Name]